I'm not expecting a fairytale
Freedom of oppression
Or any such thing
Just to find the little place
A garden full of green
To find the sin in roses--
It's a green one
Do you see?
Or does it exist?
Contemplate
that little flowery green
It's thorns are just as sharp
And sinful as the rest
Do you see it?
There--
on that empty plot
Dried and caked
Flatten and Dried
That little flower green
A rose can't exist in envy, so you say
So can sin not exist?
Can a flower love the sun so much
That it puts it silent to rest
Tell me if you can say so much
About sin
And green flowers--that shouldn't be
Reds, pinks, yellows
Is what it should.
But then what would that be?
An imperfect fairytale--
You know the one's I mean
With apples
And evil stepmothers
Or those who died in birth
That make the princess
Turn down that path--
Aren't they it, then?
Do you see?
They're little.
They're alone
For that short period of time
That little--
oh so little
Garden of green.
Not narrow, nor wide
But small, compact, resolute
Against the much loved sun
Does it exist?
I think so
Because it is--
It is the flowers sin
to not be pink, red--jonquil
to be different from the rest
But all the same--
All the same
A rose
Like the rest
















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@ Ali Ertürk
thanks for your visit and comments...
(and thanks SO much for the watch and fav!
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I think, that overall.. it flows quite nicely.. XP Sorry I don't have a better, longer comment.. but I did quite like the poem ^^
it's surprising that I came up with it just by...half typing it in an email (that was supposed to be a reminder for something else entirely) that's fine. Poems sometimes are supposed to be, well, you like them but you can't explain why. -has had that happen before-
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You 'ought to write more poems~ I like your style
But then what would that be?
An imperfect fairytale--
You know the one's I mean
With apples
And evil stepmothers
Or those who died in birth
That make the princess
Turn down that path--
Aren't they it, then?
Do you see?
I like that part. It's pretty cool, y'know?~
...How's that for a comment? XD
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But I'm very glad you liked it~ Not sure what inspired me (I seriously tried to write down this poem during choir...but couldn't, then during 8th period it just BAM came to me when I was sending myself a reminder email...so I just...went from there?) -hopes the teacher likes it enough to say it's okay to submit for her assignment-
uwah, and again those are some of my favorite lines XD (I hope when people see 'birth' they think 'childbirth' y'know since...it wouldn't make sense otherwise XD)
XD YES IT IS~ It's wonderfully stupendous that I don't know what to say~ Kudo's to you and your epic happyism-ness~ -runs off because it's after 8PM here-
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